intro compos raw hardstyle

salut tous le monde voila j'aurais besoin de vos avis , dite moi un peu ce que vous penser de l'intro de ma compos

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<object height="81" width="100%"> <param name="movie" value="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F18126958"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param> <embed allowscriptaccess="always" height="81" src="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F18126958" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"></embed> </object> <span><a href="http://soundcloud.com/raw-on/break-sans-vocal-track-raw">Break sans vocal track raw</a> by <a href="http://soundcloud.com/raw-on">raw-on</a></span>
salut la compagnie voici le break qui viens avant la melo , dite moi ce que vous en pensez